Hey, some quick feedback: I like the tasks. They're playful and fit the characters. But it's not clear in which order one has to read the tasks. I first read them top to bottom (so per person) and then left to right, because there are large horizontal gaps. So I was a little confused at first.
Here are some suggestions to improve it for next time: - Separate your tasks visually. E.g. you could have put the first set of tasks on their backs (roughly shoulder level) and keep the second set where they are right now. This would separate them more visually. - To further separate them, there could be a line between the first set of tasks and the second with some text like "Continue down after rolling 3 times." - Make the text more readable. This green isn't all that readable, especially the initial "Roll a 6-sided dice ...". Add a black/white text outline can do a lot for readability.
Blackedsissycrossdresser17
Posted on 2023-09-30 17:21:35 (Flag for deletion)
I need to buy These heels
Shiro_ShoeLover
Posted on 2023-10-09 18:52:47 (Flag for deletion)
So perfect and beautiful <3
kantaiz3
Posted on 2023-10-03 22:10:20 (Flag for deletion)
Hey, some quick feedback: I like the tasks. They're playful and fit the characters. But it's not clear in which order one has to read the tasks. I first read them top to bottom (so per person) and then left to right, because there are large horizontal gaps. So I was a little confused at first.
Here are some suggestions to improve it for next time:
- Separate your tasks visually. E.g. you could have put the first set of tasks on their backs (roughly shoulder level) and keep the second set where they are right now. This would separate them more visually.
- To further separate them, there could be a line between the first set of tasks and the second with some text like "Continue down after rolling 3 times."
- Make the text more readable. This green isn't all that readable, especially the initial "Roll a 6-sided dice ...". Add a black/white text outline can do a lot for readability.
Ellieowo2
Posted on 2023-10-06 21:10:33 (Flag for deletion)
Omg thank you so much for the feedback :3 i will keep that in mind
turquoise_brick
Posted on 2023-09-30 20:23:45 (Flag for deletion)
Got the source for this image?
godsgoodgirl
Posted on 2023-09-30 17:48:30 (Flag for deletion)
Yes Ma'am!!
SuperSimp
Posted on 2023-09-27 11:18:18 (Flag for deletion)
I'd say B
jetentedestrucs
Posted on 2023-09-28 08:39:55 (Flag for deletion)
B or C but probably B
Blackedsissycrossdresser17
Posted on 2023-09-30 17:19:02 (Flag for deletion)
I take A
jetentedestrucs
Posted on 2023-09-28 08:37:40 (Flag for deletion)
À) ofc
Blackedsissycrossdresser17
Posted on 2023-09-30 17:16:38 (Flag for deletion)
A Mistress Shaela
deno-emu
Posted on 2023-09-30 09:09:45 (Flag for deletion)
most of the time I do j/o to face anyways
lilythepet
Posted on 2023-09-30 05:31:22 (Flag for deletion)
hhfffff so hot >~<
sweetmeats
Posted on 2023-09-29 15:26:11 (Flag for deletion)
Boy feet <3
jetentedestrucs
Posted on 2023-09-28 08:38:37 (Flag for deletion)
B) I'm a foot and shoes slave