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Posted on 2021-12-09 20:01:10 by peterson123

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peterson123
Posted on 2021-12-09 20:02:57 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
This is a more realistic version of my first caption based on feedback by user noidontwannacum (nice name btw).

The original, more demanding version is found at https://censored.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=28939

Anonymous
Posted on 2021-12-10 11:31:46 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Definitely prefer the original version personally. The higher stakes make it so much hotter.

Anonymous
Posted on 2021-12-10 14:45:39 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
I personally like this better than the older one. But everyone their own thing

Anonymous
Posted on 2021-12-10 21:35:47 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Some "less fair deals" like the previous version are certainly a huge short-term turn-on, but this version here is pretty friendly and wholesome, actually. And that sort of content is becoming exceedingly rare, not just here. And it's probably even rarer in a somewhat incestuous setting like this. No reason siblings can't be (a little) nice to one another~
So I personally also prefer this one here, and would love to see more like it!
Thanks for the great work!

peterson123
Posted on 2021-12-11 08:16:03 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Thanks for the feedback and the kind words folks. I was a bit unsure at first with how low a score this one got in comparison to the first one. But seeing how some people prefer the nicer version I bellieve I'll keep doing multiple versions whenever I can think of something. Changing the text after doing the main editing is not much work after all.

noidontwannacum
Posted on 2021-12-11 23:18:18 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Aw how nice of you to remake it because of my feedback specifically. Thanks. This here tho is a bit too fair imo. Some sort of in between point where it's unfair but not like, "permanently give me your multiple hundred dollar worth consoles" levels of unfair, would be great in my personal opinion. When it comes to nice/wholesome stuff it's true we don't see enough of that Nd I love wholesome stuff but this isnt rly wholesome either, it's closer to being wholesome than the other but not quite for me. So long story short I'd say this is too nice to be hot and too not nice to be wholesome. Thank you for putting in the effort to improve your content!

noidontwannacum
Posted on 2021-12-11 23:19:34 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Oh just realised u wrote anime feet>video games. That's a really nice touch lol


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